Tuesday, November 22, 2005Another Excerpt
I'm beginning to wonder if our house is the tummy virus capitol of the world. I have a sick little one and one hand to type with, so here's another NaNo excerpt, enjoy!
Edan leaned in to kiss her harder, and licked the corner of her mouth gently as the kiss ended. She felt goosebumps rise on her arms and legs and she breathed in sharply. Jordan smiled. "You know her already," he said. "She is a girl that begs to be tasted." He leaned over and kissed her then, sliding his tongue into her mouth where it mingled with hers. She could taste wine and cheesecake on him, and he ran his hand up her arm with a light touch, grazing the hairs and making her shiver. Edan reached his hand around the back of her neck, and still he and Jordan had not let go of each other. She tipped her head back and Jordan leaned in to bite her neck roughly, the way she liked. Edan kissed her mouth again, more boldy this time. His kiss was different from Jordan's, more sensual and insistent. He took his time exploring her lips with his, gently sucking her lower lip into his mouth and licking the sensitive outside of her lips until she was panting slightly. Her panties were already damp thanks to the attention of her two sexy lovers.
Abby felt the attention shift slightly, and opened her eyes to see Jordan loosening Edan's hair until it flowed down his shoulders. She watched as he caressed Edan's neck and Edan, leaving his hand behind Abby's head, leaned over to kiss Jordan. This was no awkward virgin kiss, and they both leaned into it with eagerness. Abby saw both men hard beneath their jeans and managed to say,
"Shall we remove some clothing boys? You look a little uncomfortable." She reached over to Edan and lifted his shirt off over his head. Jordan and Abby both stared for a moment at the chiseled body before them, then Jordan let out a low whistle.
"Only you two could look even better without clothes. I am almost embarrassed to be so lucky right now." Abby ran her hands over Edan's bare chest, then stood him up to remove his jeans. His cock stood out from his body, and Abby pulled him into her arms to feel it up against her. He responded by gently thrusting his hips, placing his hands at her waist. She kissed him again, this time he allowed her to penetrate him with her tongue, and they played for a few moments. She felt Jordan step behind her and shifted her weight back to let him know she wanted him close as well. He pulled her top off, then her pants but left on the black bra and thong she was wearing. She was warm, surrounded by men. Abby turned to face Jordan and Edan pulled her rear into him, cock resting neatly between her cheeks.
Sigh..........is it wrong to be jealous of your characters?